Below is Samantha’s work from Literacy this week.
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As we arrived at the railway station…
I started clutching my cute, cuddly teddy bear. While the beautiful, emerald green, Great Western ran past us I was terrified and I was crying because I did not know who I was going to live with. I was as sad as a snatched away bear cub. I was also shaking and excited inside my body. As the queue was moving, I rapidly stepped forward a bit. I was really excited because I never been on a train like this before and I never been to the country side before. I am looking forward to seeing the animals like the pigs, cows, sheep, horses and maybe more. I am anxious because of how many people there are going to the countryside and will I make any friends? The queue was slowly moving and I was getting more bored by the minute. I wonder how long the ride was going to take going to the countryside! The train’s engine steamed in my face and I coughed and coughed until the train engine stopped going. I did not know whether the people I was going to live with be nice or strict. As the queue moved again, I got more worried and scared!